Audience feedback:
"Music is very effective; really portrays the genre of the film"
"Some of the camera shots are really good. It's really clear what each shot is trying to show"
Improvements:
The one portrait scene on the wall needs to be re-filmed so it's landscape like the rest of the trailer. Otherwise it looks out of place and unprofessional
take away some of the text slides; there are too many of them and not enough actual footage.
change the text slide background, doesn't go with the theme of the trailer
Slow down the medicine scene to make it more dramatic
Make the wall scene in time with the music to make it more effective
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