Audience feedback:
"woods picture is a lot better than the other background image"
"graveyard scene is really good; helps set the mood of the trailer"
Improvements:
Slow everything down slightly, it all seems rushed and too fast.
Add more close up footage to really get an insight into the characters facial expressions.
Instead of using a woods picture, actually film the woods to have more of an eerie effect.
Make the portrait scenes landscape.
The text speed and transitions are all different and slightly confusing. Make them all one font and keep it to one transition so it all fits together better.
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